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The day my heart broke by ~nottotallyhere:iconnottotallyhere:



The young girl stood there, blushing and smiling goofily at the guy in front of her. "I'm so lucky," she thought. The guy was smiling back at her, his golden hair partially covering his deep brown eyes. Now was as good a time as any.
"Hey, Jeremy?" she said, blushing a little more.
"Yeah?" he replied. He seemed to be blushing too, but he was always red like that...
"Umm...do you- like me?" she stammered.
"Sure, you're a cool person n_n"
She gave a tiny exasperated smile.
"No, I mean...do you...love me?"Her hands were shaking now, clenching the valentine she had just recieved. "Cuz...well- I love you, Jeremy."
His smile slowly faded. Not a good sign. Not at all. She felt her heart start to crack...
"Well-" he started, but was suddenly cut off by a girl passing by.
"Hey, Jeremy! Thanx for the rose! n_n" She blew him a kiss. Lexi's heart abruptly split open down the middle. Jeremy blushed, and refocused his attention on the girl in front of him. "Uh..."
Lexi was red all right. But now, it was another type of red. A red that was a mixture of hatred, anguish, and embarrassment. Mostly Anguish.
"You- you gave her a rose?" she stuttered, looking down at the nowcrumpled valentine in her hands. "But, I thought- you always went with me when I invited you- and, and I loved you.. and I thought you felt..." she looked down, trying to hide her tears. "...the same way about me" she murmured.
"Lexi-" he started.
"No!" she yelled. "I don't want your pity!" The tears she had been so anxious to hide a few moments ago now streamed freely down her face, unheeded.
"How could you- " she said in her normal tone, trying to regain her composure. She didn't finish the sentence. How could you choose her over me? She's just a -censor- who uses people and... she stopped herslef. What did it matter to her what type of girl he chose over her? What mattered was that he HAD chosen someone over her. She let it go.
"I- I have to go," she finally said. "Um, my mom's probably waiting for me...Bye."
They both knew this was a lie, Lexi's mom was NEVER on time, but she didn't care. She had to get out of here, keep her heart from shattering any more than it already had...
She quickly walked away, not aware (or caring) that Jeremy was watching her every step, already regretting what he had done...
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No, this didn't really happen...well, not exactly in THIS way. My heart was broken on V-day, he did give me a valentine and her a rose...and other stuff.

I cried while writing this. I've been thinking alot about him lately, wondering how things turned out, hoping to leave here without ever seeing him again.

I added the last part, didn't happen, of course...

I originally used his real name, but then reconsidered...so his name wasn't really Jeremy. If you want to find out more about this, note me. I'm fine with talking about it with friends.

...I've never crushed on a real guy since that day...I'm never gonna fall for someone in this country again...

...I might put up a pic of him and me in the future...just so you can see his evil charm that led my heart into a canyon of briar bushes...but they have to fix my computer first (all my senior pics are on there T_T)

Story (c) me

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~nottotallyhere:iconnottotallyhere: May 5, 2008, 3:21:09 AM
by the last part not happening, I mean he didn't regret his decision...as far as I know :shrug:

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~k8y411:iconk8y411: May 5, 2008, 5:15:04 PM
:hug: :cling: :cries: im soo sorry :hug: :cling::hug: :cling::hug: :cling:

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~nottotallyhere:iconnottotallyhere: May 5, 2008, 6:45:09 PM
:cling: thanx :happycry:

the bad thing is...i feel like i might be starting to have feelings for someone else...and i don't want to. It's hopeless. No1 ever likes me back *retreats into Axel and Danny's arms* at least I can find solace with my boys and my dA buddies and twin :cuddle:

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~k8y411:iconk8y411: May 5, 2008, 8:01:39 PM
DX i know how u feel. exactly how u feel. :hug:

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